What do you think of my story?

Well, to tell you the truth, it's actually not that great. It's interesting, but doesn't exactly grab at the reader, or make him want to read more. Maybe add some more details, or try to make something very big happen in the first chapter, to make the reader think its exciting. Most readers in this century usually want exciting, adventurous books-I mean, they let alone read them now. *sigh* But I think the basic plot is awesome, and I love the four different girls theme, too. :D